Would you rather be completely alone for a year or in a large crowd for a year? Explain your choice.
Living all by myself for a year is a complete nightmare but I could not imagine myself being in a large group of people for a year as well. However, if I had to choose, I prefer to be in a large crowd.
Most people will not probably choose between these two extremes. Being on their own for a given period is difficult especially these days where in we live in a fast-paced world. They need to connect at frequent intervals, or almost at all times. Solitude is crucial for me, I consider myself as an introvert. But as years passed, I have learned to value belongingness and togetherness, particularly with people I cherish the most. However, I do opt to keep my circle small in order to maintain intimacy and closeness among my loved ones.
On the other hand, being in a large group provides opportunities to meet new people and broaden our horizon. I have been in gatherings and celebrations and I appreciated that reaching out to make new friends is a fulfilling achievement. In addition, interacting with other people improves one's interpersonal skills and aid in knowledge acquisition brought by exchange of ideas. It is definitely a daunting task to live my life around people I barely know but if I have to, I can maximize chances of loving it. I am going to look at the bright side of things.
In conclusion, it is preferable for me to stay with big crowd rather than spend a year alone with my thoughts. Human interaction is crucial to our being.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59160305344 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86259796438 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4242759416 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252645107307 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724255501291 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103967041789 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183867267866 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136480780053 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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