Writing, reading and maths are the three recognized traditional subjects. Computer skills should also be the fourth largest branch. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, computers are increasingly meddling with every aspect of human life, many people argue that computer science should be the fourth major sector besides the holy trinity of writing, reading and math. In my view, I agree with this belief for two main reasons: computer skills are a prerequisite for job seeking and computers allow access to international networking, which will be outlined in this essay.
To begin with, If computer skills as a compulsory subject at school can help students be better prepared for their future career. In the 4th industrial revolution, computer literacy is an indispensable requirement that almost every recruiter seeks in a resume, from tax corporations to pharmaceutical research institutions due to their considerable advantages such as enhancing information management, ensuring effective communication and research, saving time... Therefore, in order to gain and secure a decent job in the future, students definitely should have a good grasp of computers skills such as Microsoft Office or internet and social media skills.
Another reason to make computer science a major subject is teaching computer skills at school means providing students with a versatile tool to be able to have access to an unlimited source of knowledge and information. Students with computer skills can get access to a large amount of online materials and also take advantage of distance learning, which facilitates self-study. In addition, computers are a means to expand one's social circle thanks to the development of cyberspace. People from anywhere in the world can quickly connect with each other via computers regardless of geographical, cultural and language barriers where there are social media applications like Facebook and Twitter to keep in contact with their relatives who live far away or widen their circle of online friends. Furthermore, they can also approach a big range of music websites or online games to help relax after studying.
In conclusion, for the above-mentioned reasons, I totally agree that computer skills should be recognized as one of the more significant subjects and should be appeared in the curriculum to comprehensively prepare students for their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46666666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03045661523 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588405797101 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0804456378 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.454545455 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3636363636 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236187667938 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948576810682 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654480077129 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163378383041 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533906277652 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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