Needless to say, no one can do what he wants if he has not enough money and it is obvious that financial problems are the biggest obstruct in achieving to dreams. The way that we spend our money is different from one person to another. However, as so far as I am concerned, if I have sufficient amount of money, I will buy the tickets for the concert. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explain in this essay.
The first and the most prominent reason that comes to my mind is that the concert may not be available in another day. Regardless of some singers who are not noticeably famous, popular artists have concerts just in a few days of a year. In no account would I miss this opportunity to buy the tickets for my favorite singer’s concert and wait for the next time that is not predictable when it is. For example, I am a fan of Beatles band and try to collect their all albums. Because of my countries problems, the concerts are not prevalent here. Nevertheless, I was abroad last year and the Beatles had a concert in that country luckily. I was delighted and wanted to buy the tickets but there was no ticket available and I could not buy any ticket. I missed this opportunity and do not know when is the next time that the Beatles come to that country again. Consequently, I will buy the tickets this time because I do not know whether will be another concert soon or not.
Secondly, the second reason is the joyfulness and the pleasure. Never anyone ever cast a shadow of doubt on the importance of fun and happy times in their life. the concerts make individuals excited and helps to enjoy their time. For instance, my father is not a fan of music and hardly does he listen to a song. He prefers to hear the news and be aware of the world’s changes. On the contrary, my mother loves music and goes to the concerts every week. Once that he had bought tickets for a concert, one of his friends had and cold and was not able to go to that concerts. My brother persuaded my father to be with him at that concert and my father surprisingly accepted. They had an unforgettable night and enjoyed excessively. After that night, my father asks my brother to take him to the all the concerts that he goes. As a result, the concerts are very exciting and joyful.
To put in the nutshell, I personally prefer to buy the tickets for the concert. The concerts are very pleasant and delightful and they are usually annual.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38325991189 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5383854718 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482378854626 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3233652265 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5384615385 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149844760865 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438536413463 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445317224437 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106918782504 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415607728747 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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