You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Internet is now becoming one of the outperforming technology over the others. With several improvements, it is now one of the most popular technologies currently in use by many sets of people. Being popular, it has several advantages attached to it. Although a few disadvantages are on the edge, the positive benefits outnumber the negative ones because of the following reasons.
Nowadays, the Internet facilities have curbed the citizens of the societies to go out for several days' work like going to the groceries, booking train or flight tickets, buying cloths and accessories through various websites, etc. With the advancement in technology, every job can now be easily accomplished with the help of the Internet. For instance, back in the days when the Internet was not available, people use to go out to the banks for several tasks such as money withdrawal, currency deposits, fund transfer, and many more. However, with the digital advancement, these tasks now have become lucid to most individuals and can be achieved at home by tapping on a few buttons. Even though people can now access the benefits of the Internet, they restrict themselves to go out even for short distances for work which ultimately makes them lethargic. Due to this, people procrastinate to a greater extent which causes negative effects on their health. Thus, the usage of the Internet should not cross the limit to ensure balance in life.
Additionally, Internet has an added benefit for the older generation. For most adults, using the Internet is like putting your leg in the lava. The adult generation, being illiterate against these technologies prefer to choose the older tedious methods to accomplish their work. However, due to technological advancements, many software and websites are being designed in such a way that these can be comprehended easily by elder people. For instance, elders do not understand the English language, in which generally the websites are being established, but now the companies are thinking to expand their users by inculcating various languages into their websites like English, Hindi, European languages, etc so that the old people could select their choice of language and perform their tasks easily.
In conclusion, with the above points discussed, it is clear that there are more advantages of using the Internet for shopping than disadvantages. Moreover, several benefits of using the Internet act as an addon and thus are capable to surpass the exacerbating effects engendered by the use of the Internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... the Internet was not available, people use to go out to the banks for several task...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ver, due to technological advancements, many software and websites are being designe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22004889976 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88708645548 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542787286064 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5675405394 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.611111111 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128650516752 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449339181872 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283847543477 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821905599389 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242774470575 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.