You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today,
while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
In modern times, the issue of learning from history has become highly controversial. There are those who say that we can not learn any information from history to use it in daily life, however others believe that history is an important and valuable source to learn information from it to have knowledge about human’s life. In this essay, i will discuss the both sides of this issue and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why people think history is not valuable for us. Perhaps, the main idea of this is that the past has passed away and the world has totally changed. Because of that, we can not learn anything from history. As a result, people who think in favour of this idea tend to search new sources to make research. Secondly, people who look from practical point of view think that we should look to today, not yesterday. For example, a person who keep herself or himself in the past, he or she will not be able to look forward to the future.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case fort he idea that history insights human’s life as a source of information. First, it is evident that there are many issues to learn from history. Unlike in the past, people today found historical books very reliable. As a result of this, people can make prediction about their life, country or society and live in a safe way. This is because evidences in history have repeated itself in the past and it will be repeat in the future for centuries.Secondly, even if the world has changed, nature of humanity will never change so the history which is constantly repeats itself will never lose its value, it will be always useful.
In conclusion, the issue of learning from the past has become quite complex with no easy solutions. Having considered both sides of this issue, I believe quite strongly that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. If we do not look at our past, we can not make prediction about our future, even about today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65921787709 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49848741733 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491620111732 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0957713163 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1176470588 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414785848033 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12746414915 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866296783927 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272067476693 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805609330228 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.