You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In some parts of the world just a small proportion of the population is able to receive extremely high salaries. While many people argue that this situation advantages their country, others are convinced that a maximum salary level should be imposed to avoid the enlargement of the gap between social classes. At a first glance, the latter view can seems reasonable, since in the modern world the problem of equality is even more central, however I strongly believe that the advantages brought by the former strongly overwealth its drawback. In this essay I will analyze both the situations and the related effects they have on citizens.
On the one hand, I am convinced that the presence of billionaires could be benefical for their nations for two main reasons. First, they improve the reputation and the importance of their country in the global scene. For example, the political weight of the USA on the global scene has sharply increased in the last 50 years after the growth of personalities as Elon Musk, Steve Jobs and Bill Gates. In addition, these individuals have been useful for the local economy. Not only their enormous incomes have been taxed by the government, but also they have invested their large sums in local businesses and, thus, they have always supported the development of other local companies both financing or acquiring them.
On the other hand, imposing a maximum salary could seem helpful to avoid a significant gap between the poorest and the richest. Doing that wealth would be well shared and children would all have the same opportunities, with none of them that will be jealous of another. However, this system would not be fair for people who have done lot of sacrifices to gain their capitals and that will not be able to fully possess them. As a matter of fact, the extra money one has earned thoughout hard work and sacrificies may be given by the government to poor citizens who have never worked, and do not know the value of the sum they are receiving.
In conclusion, even though imposing a maximum income level could lead to a more equal society, it would dramatically penalize both the high salaries workers and their own country. As a matter of fact, giving to the wealthiest the freedom to decide how to invest their sums have positive effects not only for these workers but also on the economy and the international reputation of their nation.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
... At a first glance, the latter view can seems reasonable, since in the modern world t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85853658537 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56146336819 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1860466246 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12954990398 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461939027132 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423405639823 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784107955649 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502073906881 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
... At a first glance, the latter view can seems reasonable, since in the modern world t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85853658537 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56146336819 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1860466246 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12954990398 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461939027132 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423405639823 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784107955649 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502073906881 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.