You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals.
How true is this statement?
How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?
You should write at least 250 words.
Many studies in the field of psicology have always confirmed that colours are able to deeply influence our feelings. As a consequence, it is reasonable to choose carefully the range of tonalities used in the decoration of specific enviroments, depending on their future usage and on the emotion they should convey to visitors. For example, the coloration of an office may be done using tones able to increase workers' concentration level, whereas hospitals may be decorated with warm tones, in order to create a relaxing atmosphere. Personally, I firmly believe that much attention should be given at the intern decoration in order to build an environment that perfectly suits its own role.
For instance, during the building of a hospital many factors should be taken into consideration when choosing the colours of the rooms, depending on their function. Thus, the rooms used for surgeries will have different tones than the patients bedrooms with the former depicted with active tones, to increase the level of concentration of the doctors, and the latter with warm colours, to facilitate patients relaxation. In a similar way, the colours of an office will be similiar to the ones of the surgery room, so that productivity will be boosted.
Moreover, I am convinced that colours can have a enormous influence not only on the productivity but also on the health of individuals. As a matter of fact, many terapies based on colours are spreading, with the different light and tones that are even more able to cure both mental and physical diseases. These terapies have become possible after many studies that has linked the single colours with the neurological reaction that it causes on human body.
In conclusion, it is extremely important to dedicate the right attention to the choice of the colours, when projecting an environment. As a matter of fact, it is fundamental to relate this choice with the kind of feelings that the single place must suggest to its user.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05504587156 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83592608924 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535168195719 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0042732702 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238812574464 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841306766122 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348505533372 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132176820511 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332246304103 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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