You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals.
How true is this statement?
How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?
You should write at least 250 words.
Human eyes captures image with quality reaching close to 250 mega pixel. No other man made device has been invented yet to reach such high definition. Depending on which colour is presented to our eye intensity, contrast and brightness gets adjusted automatically. This complex yet fascinating body part lead pychologists to reasearch upon affect these colours can have on our moods, emotions and health. Some people assert that colours in office spaces, hospitals and rooms should be given considerable attention as they influence our behaviour and mood. While others state that these colour schemes do not have that much influence. In my opinion, I mostly agree with former group and I feel this way for two reasons.
Colours have power to imbue positive energy into us. Imagine a hospital room with dull grey colour on its wall and a person lying in bed with very few ounces of hope left within him, suddenly a friend walks in with colourful balloons and a sparkling get well soon card. In almost all cases these colourful items bring a positive energy into theroom along with smile on patients face. The effects of using colours in these vicinities has been obsereved at so many instances that hospitals have now started to change its interior. But effect of positive energy brought by these colours is not limited just to hospitals as you can observe comparable affect of colours in offices and study rooms etc. Research done by google says that employee's productivity rises by 14% when they face good, bright and picturesque artifact from their seat and also when they have large windows that bring in natural colours and light into the building. Many big companies have even started to incorporate the result of this rearch into their office spaces as well and now offices of companies like microsoft, amazon and apple have large trees facing office spaces, colourful quotes written in campus crosswalks and play area where seats and table have amalgum of colors. This was done to ensure that employees are never dull and are always filled with positive vibes throughout office complex.
On the other hand, colours can have few negative effects as well. As colours are known to grasp our attention, they can be distracting as well. Because of this reason many schools have fix uniforms. Student wear mostly blue, grey or khaki colour uniform which create a symmetery in school and offers less distraction. Even labs of school are painted in white, offwhite or in some dull colour so that student attention doesn't get diverted and focus can increase towards task at hand.
In conclusion, colour influence can be postive when we want to imbue postive energy and boost confidence and in such cases paintings and colour imagery seems helpful. But at the same time when focus at a particular task is to be maintained without much distraction colour can have negative effect as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pixel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pixels'.
Suggestion: pixels
...with quality reaching close to 250 mega pixel. No other man made device has been inve...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... they influence our behaviour and mood. While others state that these colour schemes ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
... etc. Research done by google says that employees productivity rises by 14% when they fac...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntion, they can be distracting as well. Because of this reason many schools have fix un...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e dull colour so that student attention doesnt get diverted and focus can increase tow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2409.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96701030928 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42001256926 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562886597938 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5073367272 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0454545455 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95454545455 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305482700071 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923751928516 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474540844518 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192035308347 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217828140704 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.