You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Owing to the expansion of cities, some people say that the government should control the newly constructed structures, but others do not share those who insist that people own a qualification to build their buildings. This essay is going to analyze the both opinions before reaching the reasonable conclusion.
Transparently, building new buildings means that the public vacant will be taken resulting in that people have less place for walking, cycling, camping, you name of it. Undoubtedly, if the government do not prevent continuing to build new structures, the city will become the concrete jungle eventually. Furthermore, if the modern people face stressful daily works while they have no public place to release their strain, it will risk mental and physical diseases. For example, many research conclusion shows that less physical activities result in obesity and neural disorder. Therefore, the government should limit the new constructing activities to guarantee enough public space for leisure.
However, other people contest previous discussion who say that if the government control the newly designing and engineering buildings, the unique features of cities will fade away. If that case were come up, it would be disaster for culture and arts of city because every city in the every corner of the world will has the resembling appearance. Thus, the authority should not restrict people's new building whereas it have no qualification to affect the diversity of buildings.
This essay outweighs the administrator limiting newly constructed structures against no controlling those. First of all, the city should be control to avoid becoming mess. Secondly, no people hope to living in the concrete jungle because it will drop the standard of life. What's more, if people living in status of stress benefit not for works let alone creative arts.
To recapitulate what discussed, the government should control newly constructed buildings, which can guarantee people's public space to do exercise. Additionally, only can happy citizens make their city becoming attractive and charming rather than continuing to build new buildings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buildings'' or 'building's'?
Suggestion: buildings'; building's
...clusion. Transparently, building new buildings means that the public vacant will be ta...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
...tal and physical diseases. For example, many research conclusion shows that less physical act...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...designing and engineering buildings, the unique features of cities will fade away...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...y in the every corner of the world will has the resembling appearance. Thus, the au...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot restrict peoples new building whereas it have no qualification to affect the d...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...strict peoples new building whereas it have no qualification to affect the diversit...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'controlled'?
Suggestion: controlled
...those. First of all, the city should be control to avoid becoming mess. Secondly, no pe...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...coming mess. Secondly, no people hope to living in the concrete jungle because it...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ause it will drop the standard of life. Whats more, if people living in status of str...
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Line 9, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ming rather than continuing to build new buildings.
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Line 9, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...han continuing to build new buildings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52887537994 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83166549375 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6594526646 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301704811725 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100696112471 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766792147276 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184498740958 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393407690587 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.