Household expenditure(% of total income)

Essay topics:

Household expenditure(% of total income)

The table illustrates a survey about how households allocate their total income between Housing, Food and drink, Clothing, Transport, and Recreation in Europe and America.

Overall, not only do Europeans spend more their income on Housing, Clothing, and Transport today than America, but also was the case in 1970. Additionally, both Europeans and Americans give the maximum their revenue on Housing in the year 1970 and today, while other categories were comparatively lower.

In the survey, European household spent nearly 22% of their income on Housing then the percentage dropping by 5% today, so it was clearly the maximum expense during the period of survey time. In Europe, the proportion of Food and drink(12%) and Recreation(10%) experienced decrease to 8% and 9% today, while the fraction of Transport grew dramatically from 8% in 1970 to 12% today.

By contrast, Americans spent less 7% of their income on Housing in 1970, but it used less 1% of their revenue today than did Europeans. However, Americans kept the same level of consumption in Food and drink(15%), Transport(7%), and Recreation(13%) throughout the survey time.

Additionally, both Americans and Europeans spent less than 5% of their income respectively on Clothing.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35204081633 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92130489377 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55612244898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8025965514 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.125 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142390063246 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699345220456 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731550291817 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970107477092 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683648237951 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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