You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist
Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates what the number of enquiries between person, letter/email, and telephone continued to change, received by the Tourist Information Office, during the period of six month in 2011.
Overall, the number of enquiries in person and by telephone increased sharply, while the figure of enquiries by letter/email declined briefly.
In the survey, the enquiries in person stood at around 400 times in January, so it was clearly the minimum figure. However, this figure increased dramatically to 1900 times by the end of June, additionally not until April did the number of enquiries in person overtake other categories.
By contrast, nearly 950 times of enquiries came from telephone in January, and then it plateaued at approximately 1000 times until April, despite dropping to 800 times in February. However, this digital grew significantly to 1600 times in June. In addition, the number of enquiries by letter/email decreased gradually from about 790 times in January to less than 400 time in May, eventually leveling off at around 390 times.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...mation Office, during the period of six month in 2011. Overall, the number of enqui...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n Office, during the period of six month in 2011. Overall, the number of enquiri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, if, may, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92052448271 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573964497041 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9344193332 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.142857143 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132184704475 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693546983093 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612120600688 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997410654292 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648408660176 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.