You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist
Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates what enquires did the Tourist Information Office(TIO) received in three different ways during a period of six months in the year 2011.
Overall, the whole survey period experienced that the figures for enquiries by telephone and in person increased sharply, while enquiries by letter or email declined significantly.
In January, nearly 900 enquires were from telephone, so it was clearly the largest number among these inquiry methods. However, this figure grew to about 1600 at the end of June, despite dropping approximately to 800 in February and stagnating at 1000 between March and April.
In contrast, the number of enquires from individuals increased from about 450 in January to 1900 in June. After April, this figure overtook the other two ways, becoming the most popular inquiry method.
In addition, about less than 800 of enquires were by letter or email in January, and then this figure declined briefly to nearly 750. Also, the fall rate was faster than previous stage(January to March) until May, levelling of at about 390.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, however, if, may, so, then, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21387283237 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62320774715 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.012658875 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135606810674 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560590991286 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457586994557 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773884081432 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474645375447 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.