You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.
Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Internet has brought the world of knowledge at the tip of our hands. Not only it is the source of information, but also provides us with great means of communication. Some people believes that it can have negative outcomes and anything shared on internet should be monitored; while on the other hand, some are proponent of the view that there should not be any restrictions on its use. This article will discuss these two point of view.
On the brighter side, internet has made possible for us to achieve things that were once beyond our imaginations. For example, we can now talk to our loved ones in real time that lives at other end of earth. In addition, it has also increases our chances to acquire knowledge; student can now take classes offered by a foreign university in their home country. Looking at such advantages one cannot deny the fact that internet is a great tool of 21st century.
However, despite having such great advantages internet also has some disadvantages. First, Information on the internet is not totally reliable since anyone can access it; further, it can be used to spread negative information such as false rumors that can be hurt someone’s reputations. Secondly, it also serves as a platform for many illegal activities; for example, someone can steal our credit card Information online and easily deprive us of our hard earned money.
I believe that we should not confine the use of internet as that can thwart its positive influences as well, but we must be vigilant enough to monitor any unlawful activities on internet and should always verify the authenticity of the source of information we find on internet before accepting it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advantages'' or 'advantage's'?
Suggestion: advantages'; advantage's
... However, despite having such great advantages internet also has some disadvantages. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95422535211 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74242206706 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9493168082 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208622942865 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703723289209 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586463930621 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136120450604 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646613070648 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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