Nowadays, adolescents are getting lack respectful and polite to the society in comparison with the past. These essays will look at the causes of it and gives some measures on how to solve these problems.
Firstly, most parents are spoiling their child, giving everything they request, which can lead to the bad behaviour problems. Those adolescents didn’t know how to respect to others and their family wasn’t educated them a good manor properly. Moreover, those young adults tend to copy the behavior from the TV show or movie, so they think it is okay to copy the same behavior from the movie that they have watch from it. Therefore, family can be a big impact to cause those young people’s action.
However, Parent need to stop over-pampering with their children and they should be educate them how to respectful to another. Parent is the major factor that can influence their children. Every action that those adolescents have presented is normally come from their parents. In addition to schoolteacher is playing an important role to educate young people to be a respectful person. In the school, those teenagers can learn the impact or benefit if they are presented a good manor. Therefore, from both of ideas have mention above that might can change the behaviour from those adolescent.
In conclusion, although young people, nowadays, are less respectful and polite than before, but parent and teacher should start to take responsibility to teach those young generation how to be a good person to the others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'educated'?
Suggestion: educated
... with their children and they should be educate them how to respectful to another. Pare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06324110672 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63751004698 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557312252964 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4217411768 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5384615385 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233860091441 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821156208717 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850609301832 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161048355045 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605645764981 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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