A zoo has no useful purpose.
Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
It is argued that animals has its own habitat, and therefore should live surrounding by its specific environment. This pose a questions as to the need of having zoos, where animal are kept in captivity. I strongly disagree with this idea as due to the alarming population increase, many animals have not longer a place to live. On top of that, the illegal hunting has put in danger hundreds of species, thus zoo is a must.
First, there are 7.7 billions of people in the world. This reality is particularly noticeable in countries, where a great diverse of exotic and most beautiful creatures live, namely Brazil. To build new residential areas, entire forest reserve had been completely deforested, leaving many local animals without home . To cope with this situation, society should preserve those homeless animals by having them in zoos. There, they will receive special attention and care, and most important, their reproduction will be guaranteed.
Moreover, countless of animals are endangered, mainly for the illegal hunting and trade in wildlife. Indeed, some species have been already extinct. Zoos can serve as an animal shelter , a panic room for those animals, who run the risk to be erased by the human action. For example, in Spain has been built around 10 new zoos to preserve its iconic wild pigs, whose population has decrease significantly due to the illegal hunting.
Conclusion: To sum up, there is no doubt that having a zoo is a purposeful vehicle to keep alive and under protection animals and wildlife in itself, since deforestation and illegal hunting can eradicate many of them if they do not have a safety place to live in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, no doubt, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9963898917 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68992535414 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.251865637 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0667814302216 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208741097644 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236465941544 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043899995758 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022653431964 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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