2- Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of
money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and
expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom.
Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response
Spending a lot of money and throwing huge parties on
the occasion of weddings is in trend in today's life. Expensive parties can cause difficulties for the couple in the view point of some people. In my opinion, such get together does create issues for the bride and groom. Major concerns for such parties are finances and management of people which I am going to discuss in this essay.
First of fall, throwing such kind of parties come at a great cost which the duo has to bear. Many people start saving their hard earned money, way back, to give such feasts to people. Other borrows from friends and family, sometimes from bank on high interests. For example, one of my friends has borrowed taken loan from bank few days back for his wedding. Hence wedding parties takes a huge fund from a person's income.
Second of all, in these parties a lots of people are being invited by the wedding couple and responsibility to look for the guests and other arrangements is on the couple and their families. These responsibilities actually make them stressed and work more rather than enjoying their life time event. As I have found people talking on phone and arranging for the things even at the time of auspicious rituals.
In the end, I want to conclude this topic by saying that huge and lavish marriage parties is a tedious job for the couple and their families.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, if, look, second, so, as to, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68595041322 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40134914155 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2135230897 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2307692308 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17824929188 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629237170977 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035127041757 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919943481219 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376009640119 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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