Many people purchase apparels and footwear only due to the lucrative adverts promoted on several social media platforms. There are various causes of this, but certain measures could be take to alleviate this problem.
There are several causes of this situation. The main one is that some people may get easily attracted towards advertisements. These commercials create an unnecessary desire to buy things that are not needed. For instance, people are interested in latest designer wear clothes and also quick changes in fashion trends are the key reasons that has ushered an era of advertising and manufacturers are able to tap on limitless market by promoting their products on television, social media sites and several applications on phone. The ads are ubiquitous. The ramifications of this is that people are able to buy things online spontaneously using their credit cards. Because of this, some people might splurge to the extent that they run into heavy debts. In addition, advertising not only distracts adults but also children in leading a healthy lifestyle. Generalized across a range of consumer products, people are drawn towards worst impulses. By appealing to basic human psychology, ruthlessly and seemingly efficient online market methods create an addiction for their latest launch of products amongst adults as well as youngsters. In most of the cases, people do not need these items and get eventually get thrown away or are kept inside the cupboard.
Various possible courses of action could be taken in order to tackle the above. In the first place, people should go online to do a thorough research of the products they intend to buy. Due to advancements in technology, buyers are able to see the reviews of the product as well as the company they are dealing with. This helps an individual buyer to have an effective feedback before making purchases. Those products with negative feedback will be removed from their buying list. Furthermore, a short term solution could be their sheer will power to eradicate impulsive buying. This will assist people to buy only if there is a requirement of that product. As a result, they might be able to overcome this addiction.
In conclusion, advertising plays an important role in enticing people to purchase outfits and footwear more than they require due to the inherent nature of human. However, this situation could be addressed by the online research and sheer will power to overcome this addiction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the latest'.
Suggestion: in the latest
...ed. For instance, people are interested in latest designer wear clothes and also quick ch...
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Line 3, column 919, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'towards the worst'.
Suggestion: towards the worst
... of consumer products, people are drawn towards worst impulses. By appealing to basic human p...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'thorough research'.
Suggestion: thorough research
...st place, people should go online to do a thorough research of the products they intend to buy. Due...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16129032258 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72159008023 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54094292804 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.7781475044 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4347826087 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5217391304 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165209929676 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495031592035 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328126865628 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100513992639 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231577506548 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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