Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Today, fruits and vegetables are imported from some countries to others the world over as they are either not cultivated in these areas or it is not their harvest season. Whilst the availability and variety of products at the markets this trend brings about is the prime merit, the main drawback is the pollution that is caused by those cargo airplanes.
The primary advantage of produce transportation is that it provides a wide range of products and exotic fruits and vegetables in countless markets all over the world as they never used to have before. For example, in my local supermarket in Dubai, there are many tropical and European fruits, which are almost fresh because they are transported by airplanes and brought on daily basis from their countries of origin, such as watermelons and kiwi. This is certainly advantageous and enjoyable because it gives us an opportunity to experience and taste numerous number of products that could be virtually impossible or extremely difficult if this advanced option of transportation would not exist.
On the other hand, the pollution posed by those titan air crafts forms undoubted strain on the environment. A recent article in , The Economist' has been estimated that the UK runs approximately 1200 cargo flights to and from African tropical countries to import many different kinds of fruits every year. If we consider that each flight of those releases more or less 50 tonnes of carbon dioxide which is the key accused element to damaging environmental impacts, such as global warming and climate change, this, therefore, clearly shows that the drawback to this phenomenon has to be taken seriously in order to preserve our mother nature.
In conclusion, having presented the aforementioned ideas and examples, it can be reiterated that while variety and availability of myriad number of vegetables and fruits contribute to a great deal of customers' satisfaction, air contamination posed by air transport, which is being utilized for this transaction, is an undeniable threat to biological and ecosystem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22590361446 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92852692725 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593373493976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3371339827 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.777777778 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8888888889 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261709686398 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971904605429 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572225529911 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149337469124 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469551703839 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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