Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent times, a clan of masses believes that the well-known celebrities should be given more isolation, while I believe that such personalities have worked hard to earn these values in society and the same is not a reason for disturbing their personal life and reasons for the same is scrutinized below with prominent examples.
On the one hand, it is true that on the universe each person has equal right to live independently. Although people doing work hard irrespective of their age, they trying best to reach their goal without looking for the results. Therefore, for the life, it is imperative for social media as well as paparazzi to not disturbing their personal life that they can spend in their leisure time with their near and dear ones. for instance, it was published in one of the articles that the majority of actors suffering from the detrimental stress disease as they are not able to give proper time to their family members that can help them to solve personal issues if life.
On the other hand, a school of thought suggests that such kind of people should be more privacy as they always get busy with their works and performing numerous events to entertain the people which itself a respectful work. Hence, it is mandatory for us to give them a space to make them rejuvenate from their daily life issues. for example, it was published in one of the articles that many Hollywood actors longed a complaint towards many media channels for showing their personal life issues on the screen without their legal permission.
In conclusion, indeed famous people earn lots of values without seeing their personal issues. It is recommended that the government and the medial both should devote them enough time to enjoy their free time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86333333333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48973671076 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9693937551 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.9 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26976012752 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115644706576 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490000618967 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17281859276 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373827884606 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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