Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Many people believe that while it has several benefits to becoming a superstar or famous sportsperson, this also brings some troubles to them. I certainly agree with this statement because these public-figures not only enjoy a luxurious lifestyle but also take a pride of becoming an inspiration for many young people. However, this luxury comes by sacrificing their private life.
To start with the positives of being famous, the prime advantage is that they lead fairly affluent lifestyle. In other words, all these celebrities get to spend their dream life as they travel to abroad quite often for their holidays and spend exotic getaways whenever they get some free time. While a common person has to think twice about their budget before making any purchase in the market, these stars can afford anything in the world. Further, it is often seen that many youngsters make these well-known personalities their inspiration and chase their dreams by following their footprints. This seems to a proud fact for many superstar or any other public-figure. For instance, Virat Kohli, a famous Indian cricketer, has become a sensation of the social media recently with his invincible performance on the ground, and many people follow his lifestyle and routine just to be like him.
On the other hand, every good thing in this world has a price tag hence having a special place in society is not an exception. Although these celebrities enjoy explicitly wealthy way of living, all the popularity comes after disclosing their private life and several special moments publicly. They always being followed by the pepperazzi whether it is day or night, and media chase them everywhere be it any event such as wedding or birthday party and day out with their family. We often see photos on news channels or in newspaper, which often taken while leaving or entering home, restaurant or gym, which is highly unprofessional and infuriating to even watch, it a example of encroaching their privacy.
In conclusion, despite compromising their personal life, these famous personalities undoubtedly enjoy a lavish lifestyle and being appreciated and followed for their work in the society, which pales in any drawbacks it brings with this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun superstar seems to be countable; consider using: 'many superstars'.
Suggestion: many superstars
...tprints. This seems to a proud fact for many superstar or any other public-figure. For instanc...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'being'.
Suggestion: being always
... several special moments publicly. They always being followed by the pepperazzi whether it i...
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Line 5, column 668, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ional and infuriating to even watch, it a example of encroaching their privacy. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17955801105 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73956976804 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577348066298 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4653142556 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.928571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129014935787 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045756403479 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434963951763 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857398431888 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257531500027 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.