Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists. Do you agree or disagree? Support with reasons and examples from your own experience.
it is believed by many that the significance of entertainers such as comedians and actors is more in contrast to scientists. While i agree that recreation programs and activities are the great stress buster and also provide multiple mental benefits to people, the importance of scientists and their advancements can not be ignored for various reasons.
In today's fast-paced world, amusement activities and shows are like oxygen to the lungs as after having a hectic routine, television is a place where everyone finds relief from all the anxieties and depression. Not to mention, these days, there are numerous comedy shows on television as well as the internet that give good laughs to people and help them recover from the toxic lifestyle. Further, Performers such as singers, actors and comedians are great sources of inspiration for many youngsters as by watching them performed, people tend to explore their talent and polish it further. Moreover, there are many critical social concerns which are being represented by these actors in various shows to disseminate awareness. For instance, Crime Petrol ' a well-known Indian television show' telecasts true stored of heinous crimes related to diverse social issues.
On the other hand, the importance of scientists and their inventions needs no explanation as they have made humans life far convenient and efficient in every aspect. Invincible developments have been done these explorers in all fields such as manufacture, health, education, infrastructure and electronics. Besides, even today there are myriad researches are in process to make our lives better such as space exploration and cure for epidemic diseases like cancer.
In conclusion, i support the term partially that recreational activities and performers bring intellectual and emotional benefits to people, however, the contributions of scientific breakthroughs is inevitable for human beings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is believed by many that the significan...
^^
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s more in contrast to scientists. While i agree that recreation programs and acti...
^
Line 5, column 754, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te awareness. For instance, Crime Petrol a well-known Indian television show tele...
^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...seases like cancer. In conclusion, i support the term partially that recreat...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59726962457 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00464991593 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621160409556 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0713251194 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.090909091 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1818181818 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849018772166 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337606237443 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046366297413 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533222212483 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463505868798 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.