You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university’s notice board.
Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and
Give your reason for writing
Tell about your education
Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. Walker,
After having seen the job opening advertisement for the post of Quality Assurance Manager, i am writing this letter to express my interest in this position.
My name is Harpreet, and i am pursuing Business Administration at the Loren Brusque University. In my academic background, i hold a bachelor's degree in Quality Management, and also completed a 2 years diploma in Team Management. Further, post completing my diploma, i have joined a local college as a quality assurance manager and worked there for almost 2 years. Although working there as a Quality Assurance Manager, it helped to brush-up my skills and gain on-ground experience. Of course, i have a deep understanding of the necessity to manage quality in the work now, and i think my current skills would suits this job requirement well.
I have attached my latest resume for your reference. Please do let me know if any other information is required from my end, i will be glad to share the same.
i hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr. Walker, After having seen the job opening advert...
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... the post of Quality Assurance Manager, i am writing this letter to express my in...
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... position. My name is Harpreet, and i am pursuing Business Administration at ...
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... University. In my academic background, i hold a bachelors degree in Quality Mana...
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... to manage quality in the work now, and i think my current skills would suits thi...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'suit'
Suggestion: suit
...ow, and i think my current skills would suits this job requirement well. I have a...
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...er information is required from my end, i will be glad to share the same. i ho...
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...d, i will be glad to share the same. i hoping to hear from you soon. Yours ...
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...d, i will be glad to share the same. i hoping to hear from you soon. Yours ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96022727273 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96527226706 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653409090909 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8398465773 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238133054489 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925970510105 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060857742442 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126616044862 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419474066202 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.