Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sport personality brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Celebrities attract a lot of attention from the public and living as a celebrity has its merits and demerits. Some people believe that the superstars are always too busy and everything about them is open to the public. However, celebrities are rich and respected in the society. Ultimately, I think the benefits of being a celebrity outweighs the problems.
Celebrities’ schedules are usually too tight. They hardly have time to do things out of the things that have brought them fame because they are always occupied with programmes. For instance, a football player spends a plethora of time outside home practising, playing and even attending talk shows or interviews, which might deprive his family members of having quality time with him. Moreover, affairs of Very Important Personalities (VIPs) are always exposed to the public. Whatever they do instantly make the headlines and this is believed by some people to be very problematic.
Nevertheless, despite the challenges earlier stated, there are more gains in that celebrities are highly respected in the community. People usually regard them in high esteem because they are famous and they are mostly seen to have added value to the society. For example, a popular movie actor whose films have taught youths moral lessons will be respected by the ones affected and their parents. What is more, a lot of oppourtunities to make money comes with being famous. Thus, celebrities have a high chance of being rich and even becomes even richer as they associate with companies and products for commercial purposes. For instance, companies engage celebrities to endorse their products so as to increase their sales, such contract can earn the celebrity a fortune.
In conclusion, to my mind, there are more merits to being a celebrity because the possibility of becoming very wealthy and regarded in high dignity in the society is very high. More than the problems that can be faced with time and exposure, which can be easily managed, gains that come with prestige cannot be overemphasized.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 700, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15868263473 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79779966356 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541916167665 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3313267443 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.352941176 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270852352324 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917300860613 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684117630971 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169722272323 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609825330242 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.