Both the rich and the poor find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, getting into the university isn’t easier as people want to go to a college to get a graduation degree more than ever before and students who are not talented enough are finding it really hard to make their way into one despite their financial conditions. This essay will discuss the implications of the financial conditions of the students to get into a university as per my views and to what extent this thought is correct.
As per my understanding, people with a rich background are more likely to get into the university and succeed as they have enough money to support their education without doing any additional work. That way they also get much time to study. While students who come from the poor or middle-class families, have to make their own way to the university by saving the money by doing various jobs and they don’t get much time to prepare for the entrance exam. Therefore, they are less likely to get admission.
Though wealthy people can enjoy the benefits of being rich there is also a downside as many good universities offer scholarships and even sponsor the full program for worthy students and who should they sponsor also depends on the background of students who are actually brilliant but cannot afford to study on their own. Such universities prefer only talented students who meet their selection criteria.
In essence, I agree with the statement given above however difficulties for wealthy and poor may not be the same. Wealthy students have an upper hand to get into the university due to the facilities they have, while poor people have to make their own way from the scratch to the top but there are some universities who always prefer students based on their intelligence and curiosity instead of their financial status.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92052980132 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64651372767 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.570692321 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.6 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153686884257 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655261582913 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408333726734 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997509653961 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252613720423 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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