In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family
A question regarding care about old people has been raised recently. It’s argued that the government should pay retirement houses’ expenses whereas other are of the opinion that this financial burden should be handled by relatives of elderlies. In my point of view , this is primarily the responsibility of the government.
Some people claimed that family should pay for the nursing care of their older relatives. It’s believed that this is children’s duty to repay their parents for the care they gave them during their childhood. Parents spend enormous amounts of money for clothes, food, toys and education of their offsprings. Therefore, when they become old and need assistance themselves , it’s time for their children to express their love through supporting them financially. However , some families live in poverty and struggling to pay their bills . So they are not able to look after their older relatives due to limited financial resources.
So governmental financing of nursery houses for elderlies would be the best solution for this issue. The imperative reason for that is a guarantee that all citizens will receive a proper care when they get old regardless their family or financial situation. Sometimes people don’t have children or savings to receive indispensable care when they become old and feeble. This may result in higher mortality among such people due to insufficient feed and diseases. For example, a recent study showed that death rate among people over 60 years old is 60% higher in poor regions of Russia than in a relatively wealthy ones. Authorities could take a initiative to take care of them by providing a shelter and medical aid. Nevertheless this measure would require additional expenses from the state budget. It can be solved by establishing funds where people would have to pay throughout their lives. Money from the fund can withdrawn on nursery purposes when an individual reach a certain age limit.
To conclude, although I acknowledge the importance of a children’s duty to take care of their parents when they get old, I believe that governments would provide more solid assistance at this matter as it secures the future of all citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8677633023 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570224719101 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0741002834 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3684210526 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380978014048 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114648750806 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628561780982 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230560165215 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360546411762 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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