Some people that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that fixed sentences should be given for every offense whereas other claim that situation and motives should be considered before the final verdict will be reached by a judge. This essay will discuss both points of views.
Proponents of certain and fixed punishment advocate this idea because they believe this measure would decrease the corruption in judicial system. If a rigid sentence for each crime is implemented, it will ensure that convicts will not be able to receive lower sentences than they deserve if they bribe people of power in a court. For example, a local newspaper presented an article about a prominent figure in Russian politics. This person was penalized with a insignificant fee for defrauding a large amount of money from the state budget which was considered as unjust imposition by many lawyers given the severity of the crime and questions about corruption were raised.
However, it’s imperative that all factors of an illegal act should be taken into account to deliver a righteous verdict, otherwise realization of such rule will result in unfair judgment for many people. For instance, killing in self-defense and premeditated murder should not be given the same punishment because motives of the illegal act are utterly different. An individual who defense his life and kills his attacker does not deserve an equal condemnation with that who commit homicide to obtain money or merely for pleasure. Moreover, the scale of crime should also be considered. Stealing in a convenient store is a less heavy offense than a bank robbery because it causes less harm to an owner . Therefore the robber should receive a longer term of imprisonment than a thief.
To conclude, although it’s argued that judicial system has to be corrected and the measure of fixed punishment applied in order to prevent corrupted decisions made by courts, I support the point of view of fair and civilized judgment. I believe it’s far more crucial to have a fair judgment for all crimes than an attempt to tackle corruption by such categorical way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70377003069 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.640042975 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368168037452 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115381794963 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085435518426 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213264615737 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719321549877 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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