You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say
– When and where did you stay?
– Describe your clothes.
– What would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Clara Johnson , I stayed at your hotel last week. I am writing to require your assistance regarding the following issue.
On December 1st I arrived to Chicago for business purposes and checked in Hilton hotel. I was given the room number 14 which is located on the second floor. The view to the park was marvelous and I had a relaxing and pleasant rest in the hotel after long working hours.
My booking was for 7 days, however I had to leave abruptly after 3 days because of an emergency situation at work. Due to the haste, I packed my bag carelessly and forgot some clothes in the room’s wardrobe. My grey velvet jacket and a matching skirt, as well as black leather shoes were left there.
Could you please send these items by FedEx to my home address : 1234 New York, 15 Bolton street? The delivery costs can be withdrawn from my credit card as an extra hotel service. It’s the same card that I used to pay for my stay.
I would appreciate your help very much. If you need further details, you can contact me by phone +123456958.
I’m looking forward hearing from you,
Yours sincerely,
Clara Johnson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Sir or Madam, My name is Clara Johnson , I stayed at your hotel last week. I am ...
^^
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, I packed my bag carelessly and forgot some clothes in the room's wardrobe...
^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me card that I used to pay for my stay. I would appreciate your help very much. ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, second, so, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58653846154 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38458770092 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.725961538462 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.0458657756 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.1428571429 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23022608103 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725439700055 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514830219146 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117047757918 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640477717255 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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