Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Recent studies showed that after the first sentence many perpetrators commit crimes again. This essay will discuss major reasons of the tendency and propose some measures that governments make take in order to solve this problem.
One of the main causes why punishment does not attain it’s goal of correction and integration of formal inmates into the society is because many of them lack of skills that are indispensible to obtain a work. Many offenders don’t have a formal education and barely have gained any working experience . Therefore, they cannot acquire a job and are compelled to get money for living by robbery or selling drugs. Moreover, the environment of prison have a negative psychological influence on inmates. They share their experience and values with each other and consider it as normal and acceptable. As a result, they continue a violent behavior in the outside world after being released.
To solve this problem governments should focus more on rehabilitation of offenders rather than on punishment. First of all, educational courses and training should be provided for inmates. Professional skills and relevant experience , such as baking or computer programming, for instance, will enable to successfully obtain a job outside of the prison. Furthermore, participation in community service would allow prisoners to spend some time in a socially friendly environment in comparison to the hostile atmosphere of a prison. Socializing and communication with adequate individuals would grant them with valuable experience of civilized interaction between people and teach them what behavior is acceptable in the society and how rewarding it is.
In conclusion, there are several issues associated with imprisonment that result in ex-convicts coming crime over again. However, such measures as education and community service provided for inmates can be implemented by governments to tackle the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5472972973 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.047947988 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611486486486 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2273922159 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246277139713 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712145505546 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775953236392 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149868232558 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769020577419 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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