Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam.’
How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Travelling plays an important role for many people and most of them prefer to travel by private transport rather than public transport. Most of them own car for commuting from one place to another in past few decade which has led to traffic congestion.
There are several reasons why people buy cars to travel sound and peaceful. Firstly, nowadays ownership of a car shows a high statusco in the society. Many of them prefer to commute office by car as they could start to travel without any time constraints and in a comfortable way. Secondly, some families prefer to travel in one vehicle and they could stop the vehicle, wherever they want. Lastly , many employees provide vehicles as a gesture to their employees so that they could reach to the office without any issue of public transport.
On the other hand, Governments could impose restrictions on people who prefer to buy car. They could encourage people to use bicycle or to walk, as this could be an effective way to decrease pollution and global warming. They could also increase in public transport which are plying , so that people could commute comfortable and without any crowded transportation. They should also restrict private transport or parking in oublic places , so that they public transport could go without getting stuck in traffic jam. Public services could increase in oil prices or car charges, so that there could be decrease in car ownership.
To sum up, although car ownership is important but people should consider environmental factor and also prefer to use public transport for travelling
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decade seems to be countable; consider using: 'few decades'.
Suggestion: few decades
...uting from one place to another in past few decade which has led to traffic congestion. T...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a comfortable way" with adverb for "comfortable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...travel without any time constraints and in a comfortable way. Secondly, some families prefer to trav...
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Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the vehicle, wherever they want. Lastly , many employees provide vehicles as a ge...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ase in public transport which are plying , so that people could commute comfortabl...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and without any crowded transportation. They should also restrict private transport ...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...te transport or parking in oublic places , so that they public transport could go ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01908396947 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62267137217 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515267175573 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2896924477 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.153846154 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158994798516 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744021866711 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371988326983 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106383907328 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154005141228 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.