You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know:
• when you will be arriving and leaving
• what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost
• inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to enquire a room reservation at your Marina Beach resort, Goa.
I am Tim Frank from Mumbai and looking for a family room in your hotel which could accommodate three people. The stay will be for two nights and check in will be on 25th July 2019 and check out will be on 27th July 2019.
I have visited your website and found you have Deluxe rooms, premium rooms and cottages. I would like to know what would be the best deal you can offer for premium room with sea view and cottages along with the amenities which are included in it. I would also like to enquire about the rollaway bed for extra person and charges for it?
As we are coming to Goa for the first time so I would like to know, are there any water activities around the hotel? We would also be requiring a cab for sightseeing so it would be great if you could mention the fares for it and places to visit along with room tariff.
I will be waiting for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Tim Frank
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the amenities which are included in it. I would also like to enquire about the ro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35204081633 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09521255727 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586734693878 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1081832869 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321647227864 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12313841766 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436669995641 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172279769538 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472889257828 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.