Caring for our children is very important part of our society. Therefore all mothers and fathers should take a childcare training course. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Taking care of young children is crucial part of our community. Hence, it is thought that all parents should participate in necessary training to understand how to bring up their children. In my opinion, although knowledge regarding raising children is extremely essential, there are other more effective mediums rather than mandating training courses for every parents.
To Begin with, it is certainly indispensable to have knowledge about child’s need, especially in the early days for new parents. Young children cannot communicate their needs and problem, like adults can, so it is vital to learn it by their body language, which can be significantly difficult for parents without such knowledge. For instance, most of the chronic disease, such as polio, could have been cured if proper tonic were supplied in the early childhood, according health report by Fox Medical. Without such awareness, they can risk the future of their children.
However, as much as parenting training are vital, it is certainly not only be provided by courses. In this digital era, there are several other mediums through with necessary information can be made available easily. For example, sharing videos based training on YouTube or on websites regarding all requisite details for raising a healthy child. Not only this will be more convenient for working parents but also provide flexibility to choose the best for their offspring. Besides, there are five millions children born last year that means setting up an infrastructure for ten million people will be quite expensive. Thus, reliance on other mode of awareness will be more fruitful.
In conclusion, mandating training courses for parents will not be as efficient as spreading awareness through other medium. Thus, instead of wasting money such platform, the effort should go in empowering digital medium.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3904109589 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73720774674 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8578585587 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153823835455 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599346985097 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658279706031 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104866154385 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725117811156 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.