As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree?
Since the technology has developed it has started to be crucial. However, currently, some people believe that computers are extremely popular and they can replace the teacher in the classroom. I totally agree with this statement and believe that computers are more beneficial than teachers.
Firstly, educators may make a mistake due to the human factors, moreover, they can show leniency to a person. In other words, teachers are incompetent nowadays owing to the fact that they are humans and they possess feelings. Therefore, artificial intelligence will teach better than anyone else. For example, in my high school we do not have a live educator and our grades are much higher than when we studied with a tutor. Hence, real teacher are no longer needed due to the fact that they are humans and the new generation understands artificial intelligence perfectly.
Secondly, a computer does not need any remuneration to work every day. This means that authorities will not provide every year abundant amount of money for the wages of teachers. Likewise, computers can be developed and the process of education will be much more efficient. For instance, currently there is machine learning which makes computers the most productive way to learn. Thus, artificial intelligence is better than teachers owing to the fact that they do not require any wages and can be improved by automatically themselves.
To conclude, I strongly agree with the idea that computerization is the boon to the society and believe that computers will replace teachers all over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since the technology has developed it has sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20078740157 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8100005858 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6039331364 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294075571102 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945707035837 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801276824862 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173416530249 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705247378929 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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