Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The attitude towards fair justice for offenders has always been controversial in all the societies. Some people find harsh punishment acceptable for major offenders, while others argue that death penalty is considered as a legal inadmissible measure in the modern world. Although, death sentence is a sound crime prevention measure, I believe that executing human beings is unacceptable due to potential errors or bias.
On the one hand, the death sentence as a harsh punishment is an effective incentive not to commit crimes. This is because fear of death is inherent in any living being, forcing people to think carefully over their actions in order to save life. Proceeding from this, a complete rejection of the death penalty means a rejection of crime prevention. For example, according to a worldwide database, it is known that the crime rate in China is lower than in Germany, where the executing is prohibited. In other words, sentencing major offenders to death has a direct impact on reducing delinquency.
On the other hand, there is a possibility that an innocent person can be sentenced to death. This means that the judicial system is not immune to error due to the fact that people, by their nature, are prone to make mistakes. Therefore, such a harsh punishment is a potential murder by the court, equating judges with the cruel offenders. For instance, according to Washington Post article, the Supreme Court made 120 mistakes during the year, which led to 27 innocent executions. Thus, since the mistakes of refereeing can lead to the death of ungilt people, death as a punishment is unacceptable in modern society.
In conclusion, although people are less likely to break the law on fear of death, I believe that as long as there are imperfections in the court and human nature, execution cannot be an acceptable punishment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06209150327 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84278601992 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4795852214 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205838129147 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696946933565 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463974972492 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124093008129 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553738766416 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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