Some people think that paying taxes is their only responsibility towards society, while others feel that everyone should do more. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Humanity has been attempting to create tolerant and intelligent community throughout the history. There is an assumption that the only duty a citizen should perform is to pay taxes for the prosperity of society, whereas others suspect that people are supposed to make more efforts. Although, taxation is considered essential, I believe that it is insufficient without citizens’ participation in the government’s life and tolerant attitude towards others.
On the one hand, human is not obligated to do something for society except paying taxation. Therefore, if the authorities levy taxes, they ought to spend this money on creating social amenities for citizens. It means that all responsibilities belong to the state since the prosperity of society is the major reason of its existence. For example, in the constitution of every country it is written that the duties of each citizen are to obey the laws and pay taxes. In other words, people establish the government due to the authorities will care for the state dwellers.
However, I suppose that taxation will not be profitable unless people will not take part in the state’s life and respect the rights of everyone. Thereby, citizens should go to elections and be tolerant towards people of a different religion, nationality and skin color. This is because the absence of tolerance in humans’ hearts and minds make others unhappy and even could break out a civilian war. For instance, a large number of citizens in India suffer from an obsolete and unfair caste system because it discriminates their rights. Thus, people are supposed to respect others and make efforts to create a better society.
In conclusion, paying taxes is a duty of each citizen, but I think that everybody ought to do more for the prosperity of a big society that is called the government.
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87918777127 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0138074097 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.928571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194012575829 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654173443501 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591289153285 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129500541559 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343382507517 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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