Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
The authorities have been strictly punishing culprits who made ruthless offences during the history. Some people suspect government ought to prohibit death sentence, whereas others suppose that if individuals committed severe crimes, they should receive a capital punishment. Although, death penalty is considered an obsolete method nowadays, I believe that this measure should exist and this will be a boon for the society.
On the one hand, in the modern world capital punishment is considered an ordinary way of judgement. Therefore, after the implementation of death penalty cruel offenders will just die and will not be in pain about violent crimes they committed. It means that criminals who murdered a person should feel sore about this act the rest of their days. For example, the constitution practically of every country forbids death warrant because it contradicts the declaration of human rights, but instead of this method states apply life sentence. In other words, capital judgment should not be used for punishment because murderers should suffer throughout all their life.
However, I believe that death sentence ought to take places in the legislation of the government because it provides a decline of crime rate. Thereby, criminals who committed murder and embezzlement must be deprived of their lives because they constitute a menace. It means that if they get an ordinary imprisonment, after it they will repeat such offences, so capital punishment is the best method to protect citizens. For example, the crime level in China is one of the lowest because this county applies death warrant for brutal crimes. Thus, capital judgement should be used against cruel culprits to protect civilians.
In conclusion, death sentence is considered an ordinary way to punish violent criminals, but I think it ought to be implemented due to this defense mechanism is a benefit for citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35215946844 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77619232933 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544850498339 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2838178963 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233819549768 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831632145522 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426303374982 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158339126853 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370077868089 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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