Some people want the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets however others think it a waste of public money when there are so many problems on Earth that the government should be solving Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people want the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets; however, others think it a waste of public money when there are so many problems on Earth that the government should be solving. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have always been thinking about deep space and who has created everything. Nowadays some humans say to the government to spend money on searching for an extraterrestrial life beyond our home, while others believe that it is waste of money due to the fact that people have a lot of problems connected with our planet that ought to be solved. I am convinced that people should explore new forms of life in the outer space.

On the one hand, I agree with the opinion about discovering a new form of life. It means that detecting new planets or systems similar to solar systems is incredibly important. Furthermore, new forms of life or new solar systems could provide a lot of new information to explore and it will be an enormous achievement for all humanity. For example, Kopernik discovered that the Earth is round and proved that it revolves around the sun. Thus, the exploration of deep space and general concept of a universe is crucial to understand how everything was created.

On the other hand, another part of society believes that authorities should solve the problems such as global warming and plastic recycle. In other words our planet is going to be uninhabitable owing to our human activities. However, if the government provide financial aid, everything will be fine. For example, the plastic island which is located in the Pacific Ocean can be compared with the all territory of France. Hence, to resolve issues on our planet is so essential for humans in order to stay alive as a kind.

To conclude, I personally consider space exploration as a boon for the society which will benefit the human kind in the future. Nevertheless, many people sensibly argue that many problems on our planet also require funds to be resolved.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, such as, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86333333333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70118286847 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4078537415 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271550662384 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803162458558 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682384235806 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162116788092 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08001611269 0.056905535591 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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