Nowadays, the education is extraordinarily developed by computer technology. Information
technology is used widely in the world for various reasons. There is a tremendous improvement in the technology which we are used for the education. For example, the thesis papers references can be taken from the websites as a reference and this can be achieved a short span of time. Previously people use to sit in library and make notes by referring lots of books.
Furthermore, our children are depending on technology for their project references and same computer aided learning are providing connectivity to people through web or internet to access globally and this could provide an astronomical knowledge about the world news. The students are benefited by the technology when they use as a tools and resources for information.
On the other hand, there is an adverse effect on the usage of technology. The usage can be in a distracted manner when the children are using the technology in an unethical way, for example while browsing some information they could automatically diverse their attention to games and film as a result they spend their precious time in these activities as a result it is a waste of time. Another fact is inappropriate access may lead to lack of privacy and the children may addict with the unhealthy habits. Another example is playing online games, nowadays the children are so fascinated with the characters played in these games and they want to imitate this type of characters. This is not a good practice.
However, the artificial intelligence could make advance development in the world. Hence, we should use the technology in an appropriate manner to achieve the fruitful result.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...make notes by referring lots of books. Furthermore, our children are depending ...
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...of books. Furthermore, our children are depending on technology for their project referen...
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...e world news. The students are benefited by the technology when they use as a too...
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...a tools and resources for information. On the other hand, there is an adverse e...
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...e usage of technology. The usage can be in a distracted manner when the children are using the technol...
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...n the children are using the technology in an unethical way, for example while browsing some inform...
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... attention to games and film as a result they spend their precious time in these ...
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...aracters. This is not a good practice. However, the artificial intelligence cou...
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...ld. Hence, we should use the technology in an appropriate manner to achieve the fruitful result.
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...manner to achieve the fruitful result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16428571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98998327755 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4102781846 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106700143024 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383728364332 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404157604455 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693459442713 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372810517376 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.