In modern times, due to the rapid advancement in technology it is possible to find solutions to every problem just by a click at your finger tips. Since, computers translate very fast and precise, many view learning a foreign language as unnecessary and time consuming. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the statement as relying on computers may not always be feasible and learning a new language strengthens your profile.
To begin with, most of the functions of computers and mobile phone heavily depend on internet. When visiting a foreign country where connectivity is poor, these devices are unable to perform a translation search, thus leaving the person helpless. Conversely, if a person is fluent in a foreign language, they can use it to their advantage and resolve their dilemma. Moreover, too much dependency on technology is not advisable and one should be prepared to avoid falling into unpleasant circumstance. For example, when on a holiday speaking the common tongue rather than using technology to translate, will help you interact with the natives better. Therefore, one must not solely depend on computers and only use them as a medium in case of a misunderstanding of certain words or pronunciation.
Furthermore, learning a new skill sheds better light on the resume. It makes finding employment easier as it portrays diversity. Those who possess the understanding of different languages are perceived to be ambitious and many times even given opportunities to work overseas. For example, many companies prefer hiring those who are bilingual because it helps to communicate with foreign clients. Although computers are convenient, they are not viewed to be useful when one wants to pursue a career abroad.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that learning a new language is advantageous. This skill helps elevate the resume and restricts over dependability on technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'language'?
Suggestion: language
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30363036304 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06845866414 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3226655156 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190237429781 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572619458301 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06541545771 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11291586416 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580047438316 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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