In the contemporary society, it is true that for some people higher pay scale is more important than job satisfaction. However, life is not serene as the way it looks in spite of having a higher salary. Personally, I am in favor of job satisfaction more than having a higher salary.
In the contemporary society, it is true that for some people higher pay scale is more important than job satisfaction. However, life is not serene as the way it looks in spite of having a higher salary. Personally, I am in favor of job satisfaction more than having a higher salary.
Job satisfaction is very paramount for an individual working in an organization. Firstly, when a person is content at his work place, he intends to perform better on his task achievements. He is self motivated and seeks less guidance from his superiors. Secondly, job satisfaction helps an individual to live life happily without stress and mental pressure. For example, a person employed in the company for a job of his interest, his performance will show the outcome of his work. Moreover, job satisfaction also plays a vital role for an individuals growth and success. This will not only help individuals to get growth and success but also increase in their remuneration.
On the other hand, some people assert that having a higher salary is more important than job satisfaction for a better lifestyle. First and foremost, higher pay will not help individuals to provide better results in their jobs. As aforementioned, to achieve better outcome, job satisfaction is very crucial. Secondly, without a job satisfaction, a person is not physically fit and is always under mental stress. For example, an individual working in sales department with a good pay scale and have no absorption towards his job will never be able to achieve his targets and provide better outcome. As a result, he will never be motivated and unfortunately might loose his job. Realistically, money cannot completely over-weigh an individuals health and dissatisfaction.
In summary, I would like to concede that having a higher salary may have some advantages. Despite that, job satisfaction supports in a much better way. Overall, I am convinced that job satisfaction is more vital than having a higher salary package.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...sfaction also plays a vital role for an individuals growth and success. This will not only ...
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Line 5, column 663, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...er be motivated and unfortunately might loose his job. Realistically, money cannot co...
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Line 5, column 731, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
..., money cannot completely over-weigh an individuals health and dissatisfaction. In summa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in summary, as a result, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10122699387 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10335620778 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48773006135 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5523539446 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.15 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487339158701 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175756812191 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191541894265 0.0667982634062 287% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.416472878722 0.151304729494 275% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.327129765662 0.056905535591 575% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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