Some people think that young people are influenced more by their friends than by their parents or teachers. Do you agree or disagree?
In the present age, younger generation are influenced more by their friends than my superiors like parents or teachers have sparked much of a debate. Some people assert that young people are more influenced by their friends whereas innumerable argue that it depends on the upbringing of the children. Personally, I am in the favor of the former view.
To begin with, young people, especially in developed countries are influenced more by their friends. This is because most of the parents are working and are busy with their stressful life. Parents depend on coaching classes or private tuitions for their childs academic studies. Moreover, young generation spend more time with their friends without parental supervision. Secondly, with many students in one class it is extremely difficult for teachers to concentrate on one child.Thus, young people gets influenced more by their friends than by parents or teachers.
On the other hand, people who are involved more in homely or academic activities are often influenced by parents or teachers. It also depends on the upbringing of the child how it adopts its environment. Parents role play a vital role in upbringing of their children, especially young people.
In conclusion, parental influence may have some supremacy. Despite that, young people getting influenced by their friends supports in a much better way. Overall, I am convinced that in todays generation young people are more influenced by their friends rather than parents or teachers
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Suggestion: Thus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30543933054 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74542675067 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502092050209 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0904535686 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5714285714 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533715398071 0.244688304435 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203457290395 0.084324248473 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1248797422 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373234444329 0.151304729494 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882325612198 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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