Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.
Thanks to the development of the internet innovation and infrastructure, the trade amongst countries is getting easier and easier. People can easily purchase many products from other countries just by a mouse clicking. It is no doubt that this trend is a good step for the globalization trend which majority countries are conducting for a better economy.
It is truly convenient that customer nowadays could buy any products wherever they are. Customers can buy products in the brand’s stores widespread in many countries or purchase online and get the products shipped to their house’s door. The development of international companies helps clients save much time and money. Clients nowadays do not need to travel to Switzerland in order to buy a Swiss watch. They just simply walk to a mall to collect many products which are made in other countries. The international trade benefits every country involved because they can trade their advantaged products to others and get highly paid.
It is true that people can find very similar products in different countries but it does not make the nations to be alike. The features of a country or a city are primarily reflected by their culture, indigenous people, foods, etc. In contrast, since local businesses get more foreign competitors from over the world, they have to make their products to be special; hence develop the nation’s brand name and attract tourist. For instance, people are able to buy New Zealand kiwi from anywhere but they still want to taste the fresh kiwi which is instantly picked from the kiwi tree.
In conclusion, globalization trade only makes the convenience for customers’ purchase demand. Moreover, it also stimulates companies to specialize the typical products from their countries.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27622377622 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90540085022 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8947141988 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208237421897 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669145815858 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317026216106 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121818902559 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438793406068 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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