Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences
We are living in a technological era, which allows for selling and purchase from any part of the world using the internet. many people argue that countries are losing their uniqueness, owing to the availability of all goods worldwide, whilst others consider this as an upsurge in development. In my opinion, this is a positive advancement, as this will improve the export and import rate; hence the economy of all the countries.
Firstly, rapid growth in sales of products inevitably creates more business opportunities. To exemplify, many websites such as amazon, which deliver worldwide, have provided a platform for many small scale sellers to sell their product online. Moreover, this will make specialties of all countries to be consumed worldwide. Consequently, this will lead to the amalgamation of cultures and will bring people close together, minimizing the differences.
Tourism is another area, which will be bloomed by the global availability of the goods. When people will be impressed by the particular products of a country, they will certainly wish to visit that place, to know more and can even invest in those products for further business. For Instance, many people visit South India, to know about coffee harvesting, and start importing coffee to their home towns. Eventually soaring of the travel industry, will raise the revenue generation of a country.
To conclude, selling products all over the world is a great way to diminish the cultural, caste and races differences. Although this may increase the similarities between the countries, those similarities will never be able to outweigh the age-old traditions and values of a particular place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33082706767 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91128945813 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1543659004 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158540355929 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552628679921 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311053921867 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995075605777 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175001295981 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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