You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
* explain why you are writing
* describe your circumstances
* ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regards to register for an advanced computer course offered by your college.
I am keen to learn computer languages mentioned in the course curriculum. However, I will not be able to meet the preliminary requirement of having a primary computer course certificate.
Although I took medical subjects in my secondary education owing to my parents choice, I always had been a computer enthusiast. Not only I possess basic knowledge of hardware, but also the software. For Instance, I have been assisting my younger sister for her problems related to computer skills.
I would request to please consider my case as unprecedented, and allow me to enroll for the course. I assure you that I will make you proud by demonstrating high performance in this course.
Look forward to a positive reply. If required I can work on and submit a short assignment to validate my interest and knowledge,
Yours faithfully,
James Dew
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regards to regi...
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...omputer course offered by your college. I am keen to learn computer languages me...
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... a primary computer course certificate. Although I took medical subjects in my s...
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...er problems related to computer skills. I would request to please consider my ca...
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...rating high performance in this course. Look forward to a positive reply. If req...
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...rest and knowledge, Yours faithfully, James Dew
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06790123457 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99667676526 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7334300076 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253507721607 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795991621215 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676893329858 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117905205843 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455692876661 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.