Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Since the beginning of industrialization, urban areas have been densely populated by giant companies. it is argued by many that huge factories should be shifted to rural areas. there are several benefits of this notion, as this will create more job opportunities in remote locations, and also will lead to less population and low pollution in the cities.
when the giant companies will start utilizing the resources of the rural areas, employment opportunities will definetely soar in those areas. One, it would be cheaper for companies to use locally available people as their workers. Two, mostly giants, when move to low economy zones are provided land on subsidized rates by the government on condition that they will employ at least 50 percent of local people for the advancement of the region. For Instance, a leading software organization, Infosys recruits over 50 percent of their staff from local area in their remote centres, due to government instructions.
Additionally, major cities will stop getting densely populated, and also the air and sound pollution will start declining. Primarily, if job seekers in villages or outskirts of the cities will be provided with opportunities in their area, they will not migrate to big cities in search of work and bustling cities will encounter less people. Furthermore, as the number of people in cities will not increase exponentially, it will lead to less traffic and exploitation of natural resources such as fuel, water; consequently, a decrease in pollution levels.
In conclusion, the advantages of moving to remote areas outweigh the drawbacks owing to the development this move will bring there, in terms of more employment in these areas and less environmental problems in the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99062310073 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.544825413 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118011770087 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05379798311 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504076095204 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812629674259 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458677722241 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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