Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
it is always beneficial for companies and the public to establish businesses outside the living areas such as city centers. localizing the factories to city outskirts will result in cost reduction and environmental conservation. this essay will outline why the advantages are more than disadvantages in this type of relocations.
To begin with, many worksites would often show interest to place their locations inside the city, so that they can easily transport their goods. But, considering only transport it results in detrimental damage to the environment and citizens inside the urban areas. Fumes from industries bring many health disorders. For example, a study on certain cities where companies situated in the living areas are found to pollute more than the vehicles in those particular regions.
On the other hand, if these industries and worksites are moved to rural areas or outskirts of the cities this brings more profits if transport charges and neglected, as this will make the remote areas grow, support the local regional people with employment at low cost to the company. Productivity can also be dramatically increased by giving employment to as many local men and women. Resources from the company can be used to develop those remote areas which are helpful to many people and the Government. For example, companies in Kerala are almost situated in village areas which promote the growth of areas, help the public and region in development.
To conclude, although companies can reduce their transport charges if established in a city these losses can be covered in profits which can be earned by relocation to the outskirts by saving many costs. In other words, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25179856115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80281158978 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1485549078 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18985333052 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672078296395 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435071057005 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11130978484 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333522229032 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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