With the advance in transport, communication, and information technologies, people are living in a highly globalized world nowadays. It is true that countries are becoming increasingly similar because people can purchase identical products anywhere around the world without going abroad, due to globalization. In my opinion, while this development has some side-effects, it is generally positive and good for the world.
There are serval reasons that globalization is a positive trend. First, economically, globalization optimizes the division of labor. For example, developed countries focus on the research and design of products, while the labor in developing countries produces these items. As a result, both types of countries can have a higher income compared with the past. In addition, socially, globalization also increases the quality of living in many countries. People are able to enjoy high-quality foreign goods at lower prices. Moreover, globalization is beneficial to the supply chain of the domestic industries because it enlarges the pool of suppliers. This means that factories now have more choices, stabilizing their manufacturing and cutting costs.
Admittedly, some concerns are brought by globalization. The most important one is that globalization eliminates the uniqueness of nations, making them increasingly similar. It is undeniable that foreign cultures are brought to local communities by globalization, together with exotic goods. This may have detrimental effects on the local culture of a country. For example, people in small nations may feel discouraged to learn their native languages because other languages like English are more prevalent worldwide. Further, globalization also increases the inequality between developing and developed countries. Developed nations tend to keep intelligence- and profit-intensive industries in their homeland, while transferring labor-intensive ones to developing countries.
To summarize, while globalization may cause homogenization and inequality, it still has many positive effects both economically and socially. From my perspective, it is a positive trend that should be endorsed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01618122977 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40893620242 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57928802589 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3802204629 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.95 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249251324801 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062229447726 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552843205622 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150286351279 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772049587447 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.34 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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