Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
It is indispensable veracity that countries around the world are going to be a witness for environmental devastation, population, and educations, for the next ten years, if the necessary regime will not be followed. Significant remedies need to taken into account to overcome the incoming catastrophe. Moreover, all these three problems are interrelated.
First and foremost, the hurdle is overpopulation, which is the root of all complications. Unlike other creatures, Human beings are resilient to most of the natural calamities, which leads to a decrease in unnatural death and an increase in population. More people need more infrastructure and depend on natural resources such as food, place, water, and fuel, what's more, damaging the environment by occupying forests. On a recent survey, it has derived that current trees per capita became 100 to 10 in just ten years, for example.
Another notable impact will be on the education field. Overpopulation countries, for instance, India and China, are bystanders of inadequate education systems, where literacy rate is significantly low. The ability to afford children's education is mere for destitute people. Additionally, teachers, the backbone of a society, do not get appropriate wages; to do so, they are shifting to private sectors and piling up difficulties for poor populations.
Education is the key to overcome the above problems. Educated generation can comprehend the incoming situation, and will act accordingly, such as birth control and planting trees. Eventually, the population will be under control, and consumption of natural resources will be optimal, to make less impact on the environment.
To conclude, the critical factor is education. A better-educated society will lead to a better environment to stay and to cherish our future life. The education system should be changed according to the demand of the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53242320819 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24564944999 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634812286689 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2439728102 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3529411765 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293069613054 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784534027861 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761430733088 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154313387399 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975613470174 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.