Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do?
In this modern world, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the freedom to express ideas of creative artists. While some people argue that there should be no restrictions on expressing their ideas, on my point of view, I strongly disagree with those arguments. In this essay, I shall discuss factors strengthening my argument while analyzing both sides of it.
First and foremost, by imposing laws on expressing ideas society can benefit myriad of advantages as follows. If there is a set of guidelines, artists will not be able to spread news which adversely impact on national security and ethnic harmony as well. For instance, in Sri Lanks during the ear times, there was a person to regulate artists’ ideas in order to mitigate violent activities and situations. In addition, such regulatory framework would ensure other people’s rights, since every person has to enjoy their freedom without affecting to other person’s either freedom or rights.
On the other hand, some people argue that restrictions would deteriorate artists’ creative ideas and they do not support the government on, imposing such restrictions. However, in some circumstances it is inevitable to avoid restrictions on media such as teledramas, cimenas and stage dramas.
In conclusion, it is recommended to, give some kind of a freedom to artists because they can educate the society while, making awareness. Finally, governments have to facilitate the artists with sufficient resources and funds in order to improvetheir creativity and skill as well. In nutshell, government can impose regulations after taking the consultation from artists, professionals, social scientists and general public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53435114504 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0911129571 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9482798338 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264727232812 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834063189457 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636582568191 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144773584229 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307714799458 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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