In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of cime?
How can we deal with those causes?
In this modern era, the crime rate is increasing at a greater speed in both developing and developed countries. There are different factors affecting the steep rise in crime rates in majority of the countries in the world. In this essay, I would like to discuss on the main causes of crime and the ways in which to deal with those causes.
First and foremost, the scarcity of resources has influenced this problem to a greater extent. For an example, in some countries crimes takes place on possesion of properties, water, and even for few purchases of land as well. Apart from that, the legislation process in developing countries are not reliable and not equal for all the citizens, therefore people lose trust on the legal system. This has critically affected on the rise of the crime rate in such constituents. In developed countries, the increased stress level of people has adversely affected to the society in a way of increase of crime rates. Unhealthy relationships with family members, surbordinates, friends and neighbours can also contribute to the increase in violant incidents in the society. Some of the people argue that, the technological advancements have also affected on crimes such as financial crimes and cyber attacks.
On the other hand, differences in religions and ethnicities would also craete conflicts among communities, whenever they do not respect on differences. In order to avoid crime rates of a particular country, governments can impose rigid laws to their citizens. Moreover, governments can ensure fair distribution of resources to mitigate crimes. Also, local authorities can facilitate people with places to relax, to mitigate their stress level which indirectly affects on crime rate of a particular country.
In conclusion, both the government and the society bears the responsibility of reducing the crime rate of their country by inculcating good values in the hearts of their population. It is also believed that, modern technology can be used in detecting criminals, while discouraging people involve in illegal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28700906344 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98494624268 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0822513528 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159358566462 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544090463662 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579364182298 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102181785423 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578557025625 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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