Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas.
Why do you think that is?
What can be done to reduce itCrime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas.
Why do you think that is?
What can be done to reduce it?
Many countries are struggling with the increasing number of crimes every year, and it is well-known fact that most crime-prone areas are urban rather than rural. I believe that the reason for this crime rate difference based on geography is the modern lifestyle of the urban dwellers, which can be reduced by understanding how this problem has come about in the first place.
There are two primary reasons for a higher number of offences happening in cities than in villages. Firstly, the vast majority of people living in urban areas work around the clock and return to their homes whenever they complete their work. As a result of this, one could be mugged or being victimised for a crime if he were travelling at midnights since its relatively easy for a criminal to attack during that time. On the contrary, almost every villager turn in before 10o clock, meaning there is no chance for anyone to attack on country roads. Secondly, unlike countryside people, urban individuals have significantly lesser sense of community, making it is easier for an offender to attack them as he knows that no one cares about helping them.
Nevertheless, solutions can be produced for this serious issue. For example, increasing police patrol at nights, making use of advanced technology to detect high crime-prone areas and thereby installing security cameras could be the effective ways to combat crime in an area. Moreover, conducting educational campaigns for how significant is to get along with one’s neighbours and explaining everyone how to help their neighbours if they are being threatened might be helpful to tackle with this pressing issue. For instance, after organising several campaigns regarding this matter, the Indian government has witnessed around a 25% reduction in its crime rate.
In conclusion, crime rate has been increasing in many cities. Although the problem appears to be grave, there are fine solutions to tackle it.ndly, unlike countryside people, urban individuals have significantly lesser sense of community, making it is easier for an offender to attack them as he knows that no one cares about helping them.
Nevertheless, solutions can be produced for this serious issue. For example, increasing police patrol at nights, making use of advanced technology to detect high crime-prone areas and thereby installing security cameras could be the effective ways to combat crime in an area. Moreover, conducting educational campaigns for how significant is to get along with one’s neighbours and explaining everyone how to help their neighbours if they are being threatened might be helpful to tackle with this pressing issue. For instance, after organising several campaigns regarding this matter, the Indian government has witnessed around a 25% reduction in its crime rate.
In conclusion, crime rate has been increasing in many cities. Although the problem appears to be grave, there are fine solutions to tackle it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2483.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 471.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27176220807 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78547848249 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.411889596603 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 779.4 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1529861265 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.684210526 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7894736842 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.10526315789 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176001193636 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698135746421 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433443735558 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116473337632 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058897099007 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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